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#1 by conduit
2019-06-17 at 02:59
*Sorry if this comes out odd, I'm trying the quote function out here.*
Since this will generally get more attention and discussion on changes here than through changelogs -- and because editing on the description is incomplete:

Initial game description created on 2019-06-14 was:

During an enrolment exam at the Sword Arts Academy, Shimojou Kazuma's special ability suddenly activated towards one of the female examiners, leaving her completely nude.
He, who developed special abilities that could only be used by women, was forced to enroll at [Toaru Girls Academy] instead. On that place the huge breasts elite is gathered, also, the level of the students’ skills is determined by their breasts size, also called [Paikokinesis]
On the other side, during that time, he had a fight with her sister which ended on his smartphone breaking.
In order to repair it, he went to a cellphone shop that caught his attention a day before. Instead of repairing his smartphone he ended getting a strange new one and decided to try it, immediately an app caught his attention and started it.
The app icon was tapped, and a blinding light spread in front of him. When the light faded there was a dreamlike scene before him, a lot of girls including his childhood friend Rio, were taking a bath in the school public bath.
Now, as if it was his destiny, with this otherworldly Super Erotic Smartphone and its Super Erotic Applications, Kazuma's life at Toaru Academy begins as he aims to conquer all the students.
[Translated from the Official site]

Followed by adding [those skills are also called [Paikokinesis]]

Next are the edits I have made on 2019-06-16:

During an enrollment exam at Sword Arts Academy, Shimojou Kazuma's special ability suddenly activated towards one of the female examiners, leaving her stark naked.
Kazuma, who developed special abilities that could only be used by women, was instead forced to enroll at [Toaru Girls Academy], a place where the huge breasted elite of society attended. At Toaru, the level of a students' skills is determined by their bust size, those skills are also called [Paikokinesis].

On the other side, during that time, he had a fight with his sister which ended up with his smartphone breaking.
In order to repair it, he went to a cellphone shop that caught his attention a day before. Instead of repairing his smartphone, he ended up getting a strange new one. Upon trying it out, an app immediately caught his attention.
Tapping the app's start icon, a blinding light spread in front of him. When the light faded, there was a dreamlike scene before him: a lot of girls -- including his childhood friend Rio -- were bathing in the Taoru Academy's public bath.

Now, as if it was his destiny, with this otherworldly Super Erotic Smartphone and its Super Erotic Apps, Kazuma's life at Toaru Academy begins as he aims to conquer all of its students.
[Translated from the Official site]

With comments here:

- The 'the' in 'the Sword Arts Academy' implies more than one of such places. It would sound weird, for example, to say 'Harry Potter is enrolling in the Hogwarts'.
- Also is that 'by' or 'on' women? Because it's a specific difference and I'm curious if this was a translation error or not.
- [On the other side], on the other side of what? Other side of the school? At Sword Arts Academy? Clarify.
- Same as 'during that time'. I assume that 'during that time' was when he super power'd a girl's clothes off? Clarifyx2.
- [Her sister] Her sister? You mean 'his sister', or there is some character that was not mentioned that has a sister that broke his smartphone? [Changed to 'his' for now, unless someone can point out who 'her' is.
- [started it.] Started it? Started what? Clarifyx3

More for character descriptions --
#2 by conduit
2019-06-17 at 03:05
Jougasaki Rio's description:

Initial:
O Cup
Second year student, Extreme Tennis Club member
Paikokinesis: Gravity Control Lv5
Side effects: wants to be kissed and spoiled
She is Kazuma neighbor and childhood friend.
Although she is seen as a beautiful, intelligent and cool lady, she gets easily jealous and often act in a ditzy way in front of her beloved Kazuma.
She unintentionally treats Kazuma like scum due to his poor performance at school and abuse him verbally in front of other people, but this might be her way to show how much she cares for him.
She is clumsy when it comes to love relationships because she’s been only been in love with Kazuma and she want to always take care of him.
Her Paikokinesis consist on gravity control, like floating at will or move freely at high G environments, she also uses it to punish Kazuma.
The excessive use of her abilities makes her want to be kissed and spoiled and it also make her breast milk to come out.
(She always tries to hold back while in front of Kazuma and usually suppress it by masturbating)

Edit:
O Cup.
Second year student, Extreme Tennis Club member
Paikokinesis: Gravity Control Lv5
Side effects: Wants to be kissed and spoiled

She is Kazuma's neighbor and childhood friend.
Although she is seen as beautiful, intelligent, and cool, she gets easily jealous and often acts in a ditzy way in front of her beloved Kazuma.
She unintentionally treats Kazuma like scum due to his poor performance at school and abuses him verbally in front of other people, but this might be her way of showing how much she cares for him.
She is clumsy when it comes to love in relationships because she’s been only ever been in love with Kazuma, and she wants to always take care of him.

Her Paikokinesis consist on gravity control, like floating at will or move freely at high G environments, she also uses it to punish Kazuma.
The excessive use of her abilities makes her want to be smooched and spoiled, it also makes her breasts lactate.
(She always tries to hold back while in front of Kazuma, and usually suppresses it by masturbating)

Comments:

[might] Might? Or like so: but this is simply her way of showing she cares for him.
[suppresses >it<] Suppresses what? Clarify. Suppresses her desire to be kissed and spoiled, or something else?

--Last modified on 2019-06-17 at 03:50
#3 by conduit
2019-06-17 at 03:10
Kuromorihime Akira's description:

Initial:
Q Cup
Second year student, Extreme Women's Wrestling Club member
Paikokinesis: Power Accelerator Lv. 5
Side effects: Bikini tan formation and breast milk swelling
A girl from another world called Yuridrasil who met Kazuma when he was younger. He thought she was a boy. Her name in Yuridrasil is Akira Lulu Hirsch and is the daughter of a chief of Dark Elves (She has a relative named Naomin in the same family). She is a tomboy who is bright, positive, and hates losing. Akira met Kazuma in their fourth year of elementary school, where they had a questionable encounter (they bathed together but she was embarrassed by her lack of breasts so she covered her body in a towel). Because she transferred schools, she hasnt been able to see him in a long time. She transferred to Toaru Girls Academy and made a promise to reunite with Kazuma in order to relay feelings she has kept inside for many years.

She belongs to the extreme wrestling club at Toaru Girls Academy and uses her special ability of "Strength Assist" in order to win multiple tournaments. However, if she uses this skill too much, she starts to ovulate which additionally causes a bikini tan to form on her body. Her breasts begin to swell with milk as well which can be controlled via masturbation (At the height of her horniness, a crest on her womb is made visible).

Her favorite food is curry rice.
She is not good with fashion and is an airhead in that regard. In that sense, she can be talked into wearing erotic clothing.

Edit:

Q Cup
Second year student, Extreme Women's Wrestling Club member
Paikokinesis: Power Accelerator Lv. 5
Side effects: Bikini tan formation and breast milk swelling

A girl from another world called Yuridrasil who met Kazuma when he was younger. He thought she was a boy back then. Her name in Yuridrasil is Akira Lulu Hirsch and she is the daughter of a chief of Dark Elves (She has a relative named Naomin in the same family). She is a tomboy who is bright, positive, and hates losing. Akira met Kazuma in their fourth year of elementary school, where they had a questionable encounter (they bathed together but she was embarrassed by her lack of breasts, so she covered her body in a towel). Because she transferred schools, she hasn't been able to see him in a long time. She transferred to Toaru Girls Academy and made a promise to reunite with Kazuma in order to relay the feelings she has kept inside for many years.

She belongs to the extreme wrestling club at Toaru Girls Academy and uses her special ability of "Strength Assist" in order to win multiple tournaments. If she uses this skill too much, however, she starts to ovulate, which additionally causes a bikini tan to form on her body. Her breasts begin to swell with milk as well, which can be controlled via masturbation. (At the height of her arousal, a crest on her womb is made visible).

Her favorite food is curry rice.
She is not good with fashion and is an airhead in that regard. In that sense, she can be talked into wearing racy clothing.

Comments:

Nothing much to mention here. Edited 'erotic' to 'racy', but that's just a synonym change more than anything.Last modified on 2019-06-17 at 03:51
#4 by conduit
2019-06-17 at 03:13
Misaki Konoka's description:

Initial:
P Cup
Second year Student, Idol
Paikokinesis: Avatar Lv3
Side effects: She cannot suppress easily her nipples erection afterwards.

Like Rio, she is Kazuma neighbor and childhood friend. Before the got separated, the three of them spent a lot of time playing together, often in Kazuma's house.
Although she just makes her debut as Idol, her popularity is raising quickly thanks to her huge breasts and lovely smile.
She has a bright and sweet personality and although she hasn't confessed yet to Kazuma she is fully devoted to him.
She gets easily ashamed every time Kazuma say lewd things and when stories from the old days are told, she her face gets bright red.
Her Paikokinesis is [Avatar] which allows her to alternate her character depending on her mental state. In most cases, her character changes to either the angel side or the devil side. There are some cases in where may appear up to two different characters depending on the situation.
Some time ago she lived on Hokkaido, so sometimes she speaks with the dialect.

Edit:

P Cup
Second year Student, Idol
Paikokinesis: Avatar Lv3
Side effects: She cannot easily suppress her nipples' erection afterwards.

Like Rio, she is Kazuma's neighbor and childhood friend. Before they got separated, the three of them spent a lot of time playing together, often in Kazuma's home.
Although she just made her debut as idol, her popularity is rising quickly thanks to her huge boobs and lovely smile.
She has a bright and sweet personality, and although she hasn't confessed to Kazuma yet, she is fully devoted to him.
She gets easily ashamed every time Kazuma says lewd things, and when stories from the past are brought up, her face gets bright red.

Her Paikokinesis is [Avatar], which allows her to alternate her character depending on her mental state. In most cases, her character changes to either her angel side or devil side. There are some cases in which two different characters may appear, depending on the situation.
Some time ago she lived on Hokkaido, so sometimes she speaks with the dialect.

Comments:

Question. With this segment here:

[Her Paikokinesis is [Avatar], which allows her to alternate her character depending on her mental state. In most cases, her character changes to either her angel side or the devil side. There are some cases in which two different characters may appear, depending on the situation.]

'Alternate her character' in this case means something like a personality shift? Thus something like so would read better, wouldn't it?

[Her Paikokinesis is [Avatar], which allows her to alternate her personality depending on her mental state. In most cases, her personality changes to either her angelic or her devilish side. There are some cases in which two different personalities may appear, depending on the situation.]

Because that's what it seems like. Like she's The Horde [Unbreakable series] or Kizuna Ai and her multiple personalities, but with (more) oppai. I need clarification.Last modified on 2019-06-17 at 03:52
#5 by conduit
2019-06-22 at 01:21
Saionji Nanako's description:

Initial:
T Cup
First year student, Health Committee Member
Paikokinesis: Condition Sensor
Side effects: Wants to be physically abused

First year student and health comitee member, she is the only daughter of the Saionji family who runs a general hospital. She has a very shy personality and always gets afraid by strangers however she is a diligent and kind hearted girl.
Even though there is no need, she always cares about Kazuma's body when he comes to touch her breasts.
Thanks to her special ability she can scan the other person body physical condition by touching or licking him, thus she serves at the health committee. (The accuracy of the scan is greatly increased if she licks the body)
She also holds a healing skill that is performed by sucking the other person mouth.

Since she was raised without contact with the opposite sex for a long time, Kazuma is the only man whom she can speak properly (aside from her father)
Despite her shyness, she always secretly looks forward to use her skills on Kazuma, and when she does, she doesn't limit to use the hands to make contact but their foreheads as well. She set a "special course" to him, different from the physical condition control performed to the other girls in where she licks his cheeks instead of the arms.
If she uses her skills too much, she gets horny and develops masochistic feelings, when it happens she masturbastes to supress it.

She met kazuma when he brought an injured bird from the courtyard to the school infirmary, from that moment they became close friends.

Edit:
T Cup
First year student, Health Committee Member
Paikokinesis: Condition Sensor
Side effects: Wants to be physically abused

A first year student and health committee member, she is the only daughter of the Saionji family who runs a general hospital. She has a very shy personality and always gets afraid by strangers, however she is a diligent and kindhearted girl.
Even though there is no need, she always cares about Kazuma's body when he comes to fondle her boobs.
Thanks to her special ability, she can scan someone's physical condition by touching or even licking* their body, thus why she serves at the health committee. *(The accuracy of the scan is greatly increased if she does this.)
She also holds a healing skill that is performed by sucking someone's mouth.

Since she was raised in an environment without the opposite sex for a long time, Kazuma is the only man whom she can speak to properly (besides her father).
Despite her shyness, she always secretly looks forward to using her skills on Kazuma, and when she does, she doesn't limit herself to just contact through her hands, but their foreheads as well. Just for Kazuma, she's set a "special course" that's different from the paikokinesis she performs for the other girls in where she licks his cheeks instead of the arms.
If she uses her skills too much, she gets horny and develops masochistic feelings. When it happens, she masturbates to suppress it.

She met Kazuma when he brought an injured bird from the courtyard to the school infirmary, from that moment they became close friends.

Comment:

- [holds] Maybe 'has' would be better?
#6 by gnx013
2019-06-22 at 01:31
Lol, obviously english isn't my first language and somewhat I sucks at redaction and grammar, but well, thanks for the corrections, I'll keep helping at what I can.
#7 by conduit
2019-06-28 at 19:00
Minase Maya's description:

Initial:
S Cup
Second year Student, Discipline Committee Member
Paikokinesis: Clairvoyant Thoughtography Lv3
Side effects: Her clothes disappear with more usage

A woman of high morals who has locked on to Kazuma from day one. She likes him but is too stubborn to admit so. She is inexperienced with men, so much so that she becomes a mess when it comes to issues of kissing, dirty language, and masturbating.

She has an ability great for investigation and uses it for "contraband inspection" (though she is only doing this to Kazuma for now). Maya needs to be able to touch the person she is inspecting for her powers to work better, which consistently happens to Kazuma since he regularly breaks rules. She may claim to dislike it but their intimacy continues to grow after all this (She is typically sexually harassed during inspection). Maya has other skills such as "accelerator freeze" and short distance teleportation among others. However, using more skills will cause her clothes to disappear, starting with her skirt and underwear. Maya has a uniform to aid her abilities but she rarely wears it because the outfit is too skimpy.

Maya has inverted nipples and is self-conscious about this fact. When she gets really horny, the family crest of her ancestors appears over her lower abdomen.


Edit:

S Cup
Second year Student, Discipline Committee Member
Paikokinesis: Clairvoyant Thoughtography Lv3
Side effects: Her clothes disappear with more usage

A woman of high morals who has locked on to Kazuma from day one. She likes Kazuma, but is too stubborn to admit so. She is inexperienced with men, so much so that she becomes a mess when it comes to issues of kissing, dirty language, and masturbating.

She has an ability that's great for investigation, and uses it for "inspecting contraband" (though she only does this to Kazuma for now). Maya needs to be able to touch the person she is inspecting for her powers to work better, which consistently happens to Kazuma since he regularly breaks rules. She may claim to dislike it, but their intimacy continues to grow after all this. (She is typically sexually harassed during inspection). Maya has other skills such as "accelerator freeze" and short distance teleportation, among others. However, using more skills will cause her clothes to disappear, starting with her skirt and underwear. Maya has a uniform to aid her abilities, but she rarely wears it because the outfit is too skimpy.

Maya has inverted nipples and is self-conscious about this fact. When she gets really horny, the family crest of her ancestors appears over her lower abdomen.

Nothing much to note here other than some commas added.
#8 by conduit
2019-06-30 at 03:18
Yutani Hinata's description:

Initial:
M Cup
First year student, Extreme Swimming Club member
Paikokinesis: Liquid Control Lv3
Side effects: Nipples become sensitive and erect.

She is a first year member of Toaru Girls Academy's Extreme Swimming Club. She has a talent in swimming that can be contributed to constantly being in her family's bathhouse since she was little. Hinata is always there to help and has trouble refusing requests from her friends or Kazuma. She is combative when it comes to love, but has a hard time confessing due to her shy nature.

She has beautiful M Cup breasts, with shy inverted nipples. Contrary to her bright demeanor, her nipples are very sensitive and welcome a little rough play. She gets troubled by Kazuma's constant groping of them (Not that she really hates it).

Hinata's special ability is "liquid control". This ability allows her to manipulate water. It's very useful for extreme swimming and helps her move very fast despite her voluptuous M Cup figure. She is also constantly helping the gardening and aquarium clubs because of her ability. However, if she uses it too much, her nipples become erect and sensitive.

It seems her skills and swimming time improve due to sexual pleasure and breast stimulation. Thanks to the tits boot camp app, Hinata has been able to receive secret special training from Kazuma where he gropes her breasts through her swimsuit (Before Kazuma helped her, she had to fondle her own breasts in the changing room before each swimming match).

Edit:

M Cup
First year student, Extreme Swimming Club member
Paikokinesis: Liquid Control Lv3
Side effects: Nipples become sensitive and erect.

Hinata is a first year member of Toaru Girls Academy's Extreme Swimming Club. She has a talent in swimming that can be contributed to her constantly being in her family's bathhouse since she was little. Hinata is always there to help and has trouble refusing requests from her friends or Kazuma. She is combative when it comes to love, but has a hard time confessing due to her shy nature.

She has beautiful M Cup breasts, with shy inverted nipples. Contrary to her bright demeanor, her nipples are very sensitive and welcome a little rough play. She gets troubled by Kazuma's constant groping of them (Not that she really hates it).

Hinata's special ability is "liquid control". This ability allows her to manipulate water. It's very useful for extreme swimming, and helps her move very fast despite her voluptuous M Cup figure. She is also constantly helping out the gardening and aquarium clubs because of her ability. However, if she uses her ability too much, her nipples become erect and sensitive.

It seems her skills and swimming time improve due to sexual pleasure and breast stimulation. Thanks to the Tits Boot Camp app, Hinata has been able to receive secret special training from Kazuma where he gropes her breasts through her swimsuit (Before Kazuma helped her, she had to fondle her own breasts in the changing room before each swimming match).

Nothing much to mention again. Clarified 'it' in the third paragraph and capitalized the mentioned app's name. Looking over the other descriptions, I'll probably revert 'Hinata' back to 'She' so the first sentence of her description is a bit more uniform with the rest.Last modified on 2019-06-30 at 03:20
#9 by conduit
2019-07-06 at 07:55
Kaede's description:

Initial:

P Cup
Third year student, Kunoichi, Part-time waitress
Paikokinesis: Fire Starter Lv4
Side effects: Desires anal stimulus

Bright and friendly, she is always admired by her fellow classmates and underclassmen. She always tries to strike a confident aura around Kazuma, but usually fails.

After school, she works part-time at a pool family restaurant called "The Milky Mermaid" where she wears nothing but a swimsuit.

Her special ability is fire starter (fire fighting ability) but she can also perform abilities such as visual impairment, status acceleration, and thoughtography. She is the descendant of a kunoichi clan and her abilities are able to add to her plethora of ninjutsu. Increased usage of her special ability causes her butt to desire sexual stimulation. Therefore, she typically masturbates anally more.

She is great at cooking and sewing. Her femininity levels are high, especially now due to becoming infatuated with Kazuma. Despite being a kunoichi, she is unable to swim. Even though she started her pool themed part time job in order to practice, because she is so busy with the restaurant, she has not been able to find the time. Therefore, her clumsiness level is still high around water.

Years ago, she met Kazuma when she was practicing her water style ninjutsu techniques at the pool. He saved her when she began to drown. Since that time, she has remembered him, and has waited for the day they could meet again.

She is older and more aware, but shy and delusional still when it comes to love. She can focus on strange things during conversations and can be easily misunderstood. She will awkwardly joke around during sexual acts.

Photography is one of her hobbies. She can operate any kind of camera from a smart phone to a single-lens reflex (her main subjects are animals, railways, and planes).

Edit:
P Cup
Third year student, Kunoichi, Part-time waitress
Paikokinesis: Fire Starter Lv4
Side effects: Desires anal stimulus

Bright and friendly, she is always admired by her fellow classmates and underclassmen. She always tries to strike a confident aura around Kazuma, but usually fails.

After school, she works part-time at a pool and family restaurant called "The Milky Mermaid" where she wears nothing but a swimsuit.

Her Paikokinesis is [Fire Starter] (a fire fighting ability), but she can also perform abilities such as visual impairment, status acceleration, and thoughtography. She is the descendant of a kunoichi clan and her abilities are able to add to her plethora of ninjutsu. Increased usage of her special ability causes her butt to desire sexual stimulation. Therefore, she typically anally masturbates more.

She is great at cooking and sewing. Her femininity levels are high, especially now due to becoming infatuated with Kazuma. Despite being a kunoichi, she is unable to swim. Even though she started her pool themed part time job in order to practice, because she is so busy with the restaurant, she has not been able to find the time. Therefore, her clumsiness level is still high around water.

Years ago, she met Kazuma when she was practicing her water style ninjutsu techniques at a pool. He saved her when she started to drown. Since that time, she has remembered him, and has waited for the day they could meet again.

She is older and more aware, but shy and delusional still when it comes to love. She can focus on strange things during conversations and can be easily misunderstood. She will awkwardly joke around during sexual acts.

Photography is one of her hobbies. She can operate any kind of camera from a smart phone to a single-lens reflex (her main subjects are animals, railways, and planes).

Besides adding an 'and', moving a word around, and changing a 'the' to 'a', I also edited 'special ability' to 'Paikokinesis' and capitalized PKKNS' name + added brackets so they match up with the way Konoka's description reads. I also went over to Hinata's description and did likewise. Though in regards and reflection upon the title description, 'Paikokinesis' is simply the name of a person's skills, right? And as such a heroine can have many 'paikokinesis', but only one that is considered uniquely special/more powerful to them to be called their 'special ability'. Thus I wonder if editing 'special ability' to Paikokinesis is the right decision here?Last modified on 2019-07-06 at 07:56
#10 by goldgrande
2019-07-07 at 02:43
Thank you for doing this thread. I like your ideas.

And you're right on that. Yukari seems to have multiple of these abilities but Accel Boost is the one that is highlighted the most on the site.

Anyway, I had trouble with Yukari's description. This part really:

誘惑フェロモンをムンムンさせているにもかかわらず、「キスでイッてしまう」ピュアな体質の持ち主で
最近はキスイキを克服するために炎寿馬と秘密特訓中。
小さい頃ちゅーゴッコでよく遊んでいた(!?)包装ラップ越しにキスする事案を試してみたところ寸止め出来ることを発見。
炎寿馬の「キスコンドーム」療法で徐々に克服しようとしているが、すぐチンポで子宮にキスして欲しくなってしまうのがウィークポイントだったりする。

This was the part of how she orgasms with a kiss, and how she needs to use the kiss condom with the protag in training. Does anyone have any other interpretation of this paragraph? キスイキ I assume is her orgasm when kissed condition. Does that plastic wrap sentence make sense?


A question on Kaede's description as well. I wrote: "She can focus on strange things during conversations and can be easily misunderstood. She will awkwardly joke around during sexual acts."

On the website it says: 会話中も変に意識して勘違いしたりすることが多く、変態な炎寿馬にツッコミを入れられることが多い。

I think ツッコミ here is being used as a double meaning Japanese joke where Tsukkomi is a style of comedy but it also means sex. Thoughts?
#11 by conduit
2019-07-07 at 03:17
Well, knowing how much jokes and puns the previous game had, it could very well likely be a double entendre where the straightman translation is the right one, but the perverted one is the actual joke.Last modified on 2019-07-07 at 03:18
#12 by conduit
2019-07-08 at 02:00
Yukari's description:

Initial:
R Cup
Third year student, Extreme Beach Volleyball Member
Paikokinesis: Accel Boost Lv3
Side effects: Feels sexually stimulated and desires breast massage masturbation

A daughter of the famous Sonomiya Group, which holds assets equaling 101 trillion yen. She has a strong demeanor accompanied by beautiful hair and breasts. Yukari challenged the newly enrolled Kazuma and won in a close match (she was on the receiving end of a erotic baptism app). Because it was the first time she struggled against an opponent, she began to like Kazuma (She has not met a man stronger than her). She gets flustered and can not put her feelings properly in words. In order to get her feelings across, she is better at using her fabulous breasts and mature body to entice Kazuma through skinship. She appears confident in front of other girls, but feels deep temptations when just with Kazuma.

Despite her tempting pheromones, she has a pure constitution and can have an orgasm with just a kiss. She is partaking in secret special training with Kazuma to overcome this. When she was a kid, she used to pretend kiss (?!) a lot and found she would stop coming after kissing plastic wrap. She is trying to beat this gradually with Kazuma's "kiss condom" remedy, but her weak point is that she immediately wants her uterus kissed instead.

Her Paikokinesis is the speed oriented [Accel Boost] in additon to [Air Master (Air Flow Control)] and [Electric Thunder (Electric Familiar)]. She partakes in feminine activities like horseback riding and fencing, all while participating in Extreme Beach Volleyball. She has won many matches with her quick and electric physical style of play. In this instance, she combines Air Master and Electric Thunder to increase the power of her strikes. Very few are able to receive them. However, the more she uses her abilities, the more her estrus reaches shameful levels and she will desire a breast massage. She has been able to calm her estrus by doing her self bust massage masturbation after close matches.

Edit:
R Cup
Third year student, Extreme Beach Volleyball Member
Paikokinesis: Accel Boost Lv3
Side effects: Feels sexually stimulated and desires breast massage masturbation

A daughter of the famous Sonomiya Group, which holds assets equaling 101 trillion yen. She has a strong demeanor accompanied by beautiful hair and breasts. Yukari challenged the newly enrolled Kazuma and won in a close match (she was on the receiving end of an erotic baptism app). Because it was the first time she struggled against an opponent, she began to like Kazuma (She has not met a man stronger than her). She gets flustered and can not put her feelings properly in words. In order to get her feelings across, she is better at using her fabulous breasts and mature body to entice Kazuma through skinship. She appears confident in front of other girls, but feels deep temptations when just with Kazuma.

Despite her tempting pheromones, she has a pure constitution and can have an orgasm with just a kiss. She is partaking in secret special training with Kazuma to overcome this. When she was a kid, she used to pretend kiss (?!) a lot and found she would stop coming after kissing plastic wrap. She is trying to beat this gradually with Kazuma's "kiss condom" remedy, the drawback to this is that she immediately wants her womb kissed instead.

Her Paikokinesis is the speed oriented [Accel Boost] in addition to [Air Master (Air Flow Control)] and [Electric Thunder (Electric Familiar)]. She partakes in feminine activities like horseback riding and fencing, all while participating in Extreme Beach Volleyball. She has won many matches with her quick and electric physical style of play. In this instance, she combines Air Master and Electric Thunder to increase the power of her strikes. Very few are able to receive them. However, the more she uses her abilities, the more her estrus reaches shameful levels and she will desire a breast massage. She has been able to calm her estrus by doing her self bust massage masturbation after close matches.

Probably the biggest change was editing 'but her weakpoint' to 'the drawback to this'. The line of thought I was working with was 'weakpoint' means something like 'the catch with Yukari doing this 'remedy' with Kazuma is that (etc)' or 'however, the problem with this' and such. Basically, there's a downside, right. Thus the edit. Would be more accurate to say 'However, do to her weakness, her womb starts wanting to be kissed instead.'?Last modified on 2019-07-08 at 02:02
#13 by goldgrande
2019-07-08 at 02:50
How well do you understand Japanese? I'm not fluent by any means but I can read well enough. That one thing with the kiss playing with the plastic wrap I kept staring at for a while.
#14 by conduit
2019-07-08 at 05:03
I can read Japanese on a basic level. My ability to comprehend/understand more complex sentences is not particularly great by any means, that's why I tend to work with editing most of the time.
#15 by conduit
2019-07-12 at 18:00
Lilia's description:

Initial:

I Cup
First year student, Extreme Rhythmic Gymnastics Club member
Paikokinesis: Teleport Lv2
Side effects: Her underwear does not teleport with her

A girl who emerged from a smartphone game Kazuma plays (the name of the game being "Motto Oppai Ero Mahou Gakuen Ex ~Impregnate the Magic Girls~" or otherwise abbreviated as "Pai-O"). She had run into Kazuma by chance at the Pineapple Store when there happened to be a dimensional distortion. She is the one that gave him the mysterious erotic cellphone.

Her personality is unobtrusive and does not care for details. She is an open-world character that follows her own pace. She is able to properly talk to an enthusiastic Kazuma about things like games, manga, and anime because she herself is from a game. As soon as something inconvenient occurs, she will blame it on "management". When demonstrating her abilities or going out on quests, she'll occasionally show her clumsy nature.

She is Kazuma's favorite character in the game. He always equips her with erotic clothing when taking her on quests, which leads to her exclaiming meta and quirky statements. She calls Kazuma "Master" when in the game. Lilia came to Kazuma's world to meet him due to how much he cares for her in the game. It was able to happen due to their mutual desires synchronizing.

In Toaru Girls Academy, where Kazuma is attending, she joined the Extreme Rhythmic Gymnastics Club. Her Paikokinesis is [Teleport (Instant Movement)]. When she uses it, she typically puts a bandage on her crotch due to how her underwear does not teleport with her (that does not disappear because they are not underwear). She also has the ability to move back and forth between the world of her game (Yuridrasil) and Kazuma's world.

Edit:
I Cup
First year student, Extreme Rhythmic Gymnastics Club member
Paikokinesis: Teleport Lv2
Side effects: Her underwear does not teleport with her

A girl who emerged from a smartphone game Kazuma plays (the name of the game being "Motto Oppai Ero Mahou Gakuen Ex ~Impregnate the Magic Girls~" or otherwise abbreviated as "Pai-O"). She had run into Kazuma by chance at the Pineapple Store when there happened to be a dimensional distortion. She is the one that gave him the mysterious erotic cellphone.

Personality-wise, she's unobtrusive and apathetic for details. She is an open-world character that follows her own pace. She is able to properly talk to an enthusiastic Kazuma about things like games, manga, and anime because she herself is from a game. As soon as something inconvenient occurs, she will blame it on "management". When demonstrating her abilities or going out on quests, she'll occasionally show her clumsy nature.

She is Kazuma's favorite character in the game. He always equips her with erotic clothing when taking her on quests, which leads to her exclaiming meta and quirky statements. She calls Kazuma "Master" when in the game. Lilia came to Kazuma's world to meet him due to how much he cares for her in the game. This was able to happen due to their mutual desires synchronizing.

In Toaru Girls Academy, where Kazuma is attending, she joined the Extreme Rhythmic Gymnastics Club. Her Paikokinesis is [Teleport (Instant Movement)]. When she uses it, her underwear does not teleport with her. To combat this issue, she typically puts a bandage on her crotch -- the bandage doesn't disappear because it's not underwear. She also has the ability to move back and forth between the world of her game (Yuridrasil) and Kazuma's world.

Comment:
Biggest change is probably

When she uses it, she typically puts a bandage on her crotch due to how her underwear does not teleport with her (that does not disappear because they are not underwear).

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When she uses it, her underwear does not teleport with her. To combat this issue, she typically puts a bandage on her crotch -- the bandage doesn't disappear when she teleports because it's not underwear.

Relatively speaking, this conveys the same information, right? Basically: 'When she teleports, she loses her undies, so she wears a bandage to deal with that.' Though that also plays on the assumption she is always wearing a bandage down under, rather than only putting one on before she decides to use her power. But I would figure for such a power one would be always prepared unless they want to TP and suddenly be pantyless.Last modified on 2019-07-12 at 18:04
#16 by conduit
2019-07-12 at 18:09
Also, in regards to Lecia's name, the discussion of her full name [リーゼ シャルロ - フォン - ケーニッヒ] ended up with someone saying it would probably be read as Liese Charlot Von Koenig, or something of the sort. She's clearly a Jalter expie, and her battle suit has the iron cross on it, so you've got a bit of French and German in her character design (which is also given in her description, since it says she's european). Course, I can't say that anon's romanization of the name is correct or not, but it seems one of the most logical so far.Last modified on 2019-07-12 at 18:27
#17 by goldgrande
2019-07-13 at 00:10
Yes, the intention is she puts on a bandage there cause it wont disappear from her body.

Lecia's description also has other kana names for her country and gun. ケーニッヒ・ヴェグマン, ゲパルト , ノイエゲルマン
#18 by conduit
2019-07-13 at 01:10
ケーニッヒ・ヴェグマン would maybe be Koenig-Wegman (this is based on ケーニッヒ that makes up Lecia's last name.)
ゲパルト is maybe supposed to be a 'Gewehr, but spelled differently' sort of thing.
Last one is already figured out.

Also, given there's pretty much no mention of any sort of French influence in her character [in the game] (even though she's an expie of an expie of a French Saint) I'm unsure to the first name now. Given the anon that provided it was going with a bit of french in her first name. Who knows, honestly. I think these sort of questions are better off asked to Milk Factory on their twitter, maybe.Last modified on 2019-07-13 at 01:15
#19 by goldgrande
2019-07-13 at 01:32
I dont know if they would respond. I honestly doubt they know either. It is kind of a gibberish fantasy name.

Her main handle on the website is just "Lecia", her nickname. So I wouldnt worry too much.

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