<report>I don't wanna be a downer, this is clearly a project by a young and inexperienced developer. I'm very impressed they made it and released it out there for people to read, it takes a lot of guts to do that.
HOWEVER
This vn has many flaws. first, there's like one music track and it's kind of awful to listen to. Second, the sprites are taken from some flash character designer or something. third, the writing is very poor, lots of grammatical and spelling errors throughout this short vn. Now, their twitter says that they're releasing a new updated version with fixes to the text, new character sprites, and new music, so hopefully they can address these problems however I do not think it can...
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