If you're here for Nasu usual chuuni stuff, you've got it. SoL has also vastly improved. He also pulls off the Aoko-Alice-SJR trio so well even as a Fate-biased person I have to tip my (sword-filled) fedora and call them the best characters ever written by him. SJR is amazing. Aoko is wonderful. Alice is my angel.
Kinomi did nothing wrong.
But yeah, can we talk about the lack of a sequel? No? Back to ignoring FGO it is.