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Review of Lessons in Love

SubjectLessons in Love
ByHelpfulness: 10
Vote: 5
cheekyman07 on 2021-09-22 last updated on 2022-08-28
ReviewI have no idea why there are 10/10 reviews for this game, and I feel like this needs to be cleared up so that people who are looking for something new to read won't be misled by such blatant bias.

The game is unfinished however I have read quite a lot of hours up to the last few updates (0.18 ish). I have since dropped this game since I lost interest entirely.

I will attempt to put forth the good and the bad and the mistakes that led me to ultimately dropping the game. This is a shame because it does have some potential here and there.

The good

Some of the characters are genuinely interesting and enjoyable, they feature some pretty good writing as well. These would be Yumi, Sana, and Maya. These three stood out to me the most and I found them to be entertaining for different reasons.

- Yumi is basically an I'm mad at everything trope, but it does not stop the interactions from being genuinely hilarious.
- Sana is one of the few more heartwarming interactions that I experienced with a girl struggling to come out of her shell, and for once the MC is actually somewhat kind and helpful in these interactions.
- Then there's Maya, I do not like this character but I like the conversations that are had between her and the MC. The greatest potential of the game was held in those conversations, that bit of mystery is refreshing.

- The MC is an awful empty shell of a person. I actually think this is pretty interesting, a very surreal experience. You are left wondering how any single character can come to like him. I hated this character, which was of course by design.

Since the rest of the characters did not stand out enough for me to warrant writing about them, and for the sake of not making my review a bigger bible than it already will be I won't write about each and every one of them.

Humor - This novel actually gets off to a pretty decent start, the main story events and the MC persuing the characters I found pretty funny at times and entertaining enough for me to read for a while each time I opened up the game.

Animations and E scenes etc - This game is an eroge & harem sim after all. Credit where credit is due, the scenes are pretty enjoyable. The comedy also pairs well with this too.

Character Art - The characters are well made, and have multiple outfits and such.

Interface - The information you can get about character routes, and your progress in the story is pretty useful. Progressing would be even harder without it.

The bad

Structure of story progression
- By far the single most frustrating part of this entire game, you have to progress the story in extremely specific ways which really sucks the enjoyment out of it. The game becomes a chore/grind because of this and it only gets worse the further you go, and worse again with the introduction to the 'edgy' puzzle/horror scenes. A complete restructure would do this game wonders honestly.

Structure of character routes
- Just as messed up as the story progression, you can only progress small parts at a time of random characters based on whenever it was updated at the time. A huge improvement could be made here if it was all revisited and organized a bit better. I do not enjoy jigsaw puzzles when it comes to character routes. Just like the main story, it is a mess. If you are interested in certain characters, too bad you have to do a bunch of other ones just to continue reading and you won't be able to finish the other characters until you progress somewhere else and so on and so forth.

Trying to stand out, but instead of being edgy it's just cringe
- The gimmick of this game, happy scenes, or whatever. Random other strikethrough lines or alternative things. Basically just weird stuff. Made for the purpose of being scary or trying to screw with the mind of the reader, though for me it was more of a comedic thing where I just laughed at how bad these are.

The plotline
- What do I even say about this, I remember it just being intentionally cryptic to go along with the gimmick of being difficult and trying to confuse the reader, I did not buy this shallow attempt for a second.

Music
- Not much to say about the music, and that's why it's in this section
Art (noncharacter)
- Most of the art that is not character specific is pretty generic.

Conclusion
- This is the kind of game you can pick up and read if you are really bored and want a few laughs, or to enjoy a few e-scenes. After all, it's free, and the only reason my rating is not lower than it already is.

- If you want a similar experience to this game without all the edgy fluff then just read majikoi, it's way funnier and does not have a stupidly complicated progression system for no reason.

Update#2 - I was going to re-review this but now I wont be since someone else posted one and it appears that the game still suffers the same issues despite the major update.
10 points
#1 by antherus
2021-09-24 at 04:28
< report >Pretty sure the 10's were fans that the author was directing to this site. He asked them to give it 10 and glowing reviews. The mods already called him on it, and he stopped doing it.

The thing is a work in progress, so I'm hesitant to give a review. He has stated that he's not happy with much of the earlier work he did on it and is working on a rewrite. As it currently stands, it's not bad, though much of the criticisms you had for it are valid, especially the sometimes obscure and byzantine ways you have to progress the story.

As it is, I'd currently give it a 6 or 7.
#2 by otakuone
2021-09-24 at 08:52
< report >pleasing to see more actually normal reviews for this vn
#3 by visuals1oth
2021-10-04 at 03:26
< report >Some of the 10's were definitely sus, but I think some of them were legit. Unfortunately, it seems anyone who gives this game a 10/10 just gets flagged immediately so...that's awesome.
#4 by cheekyman07
2021-10-04 at 20:34
< report >Yeah, I saw the discussion a bit after I posted the review and it explained everything. Hopefully what I posted did not come out as too hostile.

There were large parts of the game that I did enjoy a lot. Perhaps some of my hostility was because I cared about the game so the negative parts made me angrier than usual lol.

I did notice that the creator said that he was going to rework a bunch of the early parts. Hopefully, that means fixing the tedious way that you have to progress because that was my biggest issue with the game.

If that happens, I'll come back to this in the future and edit the review for the sake of fairness.Last modified on 2021-10-04 at 20:37
#5 by cheekyman07
2022-07-20 at 06:20
< report >Well, looks like that rework has been done. Will re-review in near future.