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Review of Sousaku Kanojo no Ren'ai Koushiki

SubjectSousaku Kanojo no Ren'ai Koushiki
Sousaku Kanojo no Ren'ai Koushiki - Download Edition
ByVote: 7dragonslay on 2021-11-30
ReviewYeah, I personally enjoyed this series more than I thought I would at the beginning,but the end (Ayase's route) left me w a very bitter taste in my mouth.

Idk about you guys, but I hate, really hate sad endings, I hate them so much that I refuse to even read/play a game if I know beforehand that it has a sad end. I personally can't really agree with what they did, I find it even mind-boggling, life at the end of the day is the most important thing, as long as you are alive you can do more.

So to sacrifice your very last chances of living just because you can't fkin postpone the creation of some shitty game for a few fkin months is fkin retarded and make no sense to me. I'm pissed that the MC is also a jackass and pussy who couldn't force Ayase in trying to do it, if he really loved her then he would have tried his utmost to have her do the surgery, even if in the end she should have hated him. This ending feels so forced and moronic, you know a sad ending doesn't mean that it will automatically be better than a happy one. Idk man, I'm pretty pissed, once again I really can't understand the action of those characters, all they had to do was to fkin postpone the creation of that shitty game, it's not like she couldn't have completed it after the surgery, can someone explain to me why did they do something so moronic ?

Yeah, besides Ayase's route which was dog pop, the other 3 routes were quite good, especially's Kiriha's, if not for Ayase's diarrhoea forced route, I would have given this game a 8, but what can you do ....


#1 by funnerific
2021-11-30 at 21:16
< report >Spoilers...?
#2 by dragonslay
2021-11-30 at 21:35
< report >I forgot to put the spoiler tags, my bad.
#3 by gilang4321
2021-11-30 at 21:58
< report >i vote 7 not because of the ending, but the scenario is not too good
#4 by kidbuu25
2021-12-01 at 03:55
< report >Well said, my friend. I couldn't agree more. No matter what people say about the plot and so on, I still enjoyed this a lot.

However, like you said, Ayase's ending almost ruined everything. I mean all the characters has grown up and matured a lot after overcoming many hardships in 2 years but in the end, they are still kids who stick to their youthful passion and fragile dream until the end without realizing there are more important things. This ending alone made me hate both the heroine and MC and gave me the urge to tag this with "utsuge" so people like us can avoid this.

It would be perfect without this kind of ending so I still gave it 9/10 despite my complains.
#5 by mushu
2021-12-01 at 04:26
< report >the game did repeatedly say that the success rate of the surgery was already very low, and would get even lower the longer they put it off. Let's just assume that means the success rate was already below 10% or something like that(I do not recall seeing actual numbers, so I'm throwing a random one, possibly too low), and they have already been putting it off for years. I can kind of see why someone would rather finish their last piece of work or spend time with family vs gambling on something that in most cases would not have succeeded, but well... I think the game they were making was bad so it kinda becomes harder to justify that in my eyes, if it was something potentially "good", then maybe more people would be convinced by their "silly" decision. Of course, some people absolutely love key magic so... Last modified on 2021-12-01 at 04:35
#6 by kidbuu25
2021-12-01 at 05:20
< report >#5
I know that very well but at the end of the day, what's the point of reading "pure love" story just to get slapped in the face with reality in the end? And as you said, I'm the type of loving key magic so it doesn't matter how well it was made to justify the "false hope" kind of ending, it still leaves bad taste in my mouth after that. There might be masochist people (lol) who love this kind of bitter sweet? ending but it's impossible for me because I don't want to seek for reality even in fiction. If they still wanted to do it this way then it would be better to give another alternate "happy" ending to satisfy both kinds of reader imo.

That aside, maybe because my standard is low but the way the story was executed is very good and way better than most of other titles with same genre.
#7 by dragonslay
2021-12-01 at 08:50
< report >#5 well mate, even so , even if the chance was lower than 10% , FFS, you only have one life, if there is a chance for success you should always take it, like what would she lose ? she already had only a few weeks/months left. The end ruined all the game build up to that moment, in the real world any normal reasonable person would always take the chances, it's not like you have anything to lose? you die regardless, but if you are willing to try you actually might get the chance to recover, isn't this an about decision/bet? you have nothing to lose, only to win.
#8 by kidbuu25
2021-12-01 at 09:03
< report >#7
Agreed. Well, just think of it as we only played this game for other heroines because their routes were all well done. I'm glad the main heroine is not really my type so I will just think of it as the only bad ending in a whole vanilla package. Looking forward to a FD in which they will give us more routes with sub heroines and maybe an alternate "happy" ending for her if they ever plan to make it in the future.Last modified on 2021-12-02 at 02:56
#9 by mushu
2021-12-01 at 09:06
< report >#7
you have months/years to lose to that sort of bet, vs ending right away because "I want to gamble". It isn't as black and white as you make it out to be. And no, reasonable people will worry over about this, and not always want to gamble on those low odds all the time, because who knows maybe it won't even fix everything and only adds a couple of years with high risk.Last modified on 2021-12-01 at 09:27
#10 by kidbuu25
2021-12-01 at 10:01
< report >So in the end, it's either "betting everything for small chance to live right away" or "giving up and spending what little remaining time to do what you love the most". At least, the first option won't leave me with any regret because I know I already did everything. However, the whole point of this game was all about "How to stay as Creator until the end" so obviously they would go for the later for the sake of drama. Ironically, like Ayase always says in the story, sad ending will remain and echo strongly in the heart of readers so the fact that we are discussing about it now already proved it.Last modified on 2021-12-02 at 02:55
#11 by mushu
2021-12-01 at 10:12
< report >It was more like the game didn't do anything that I wanted out of it and I'm disappointed and I wanted to share the frustration but ok.
#12 by dragonslay
2021-12-01 at 10:16
< report >#9 mate I was referring to Ayase doing the operation now at the end, when she barely had a few weeks left, when her route started, at that point if she chose to do the surgery she really didn't have that much to lose. I understand why she chose to live like a normal student for 2 years and not do the surgery, but in the end, when her route started she barely had any time left and she still had a chance to recover, at that point she really didn't have that much to lose.

In the end, her actions didn't really make that much sense to me, if you really want to be a creator, if you really want to truly be remembered as one, shouldn't you want to live more to create more? I feel pity for her parents as well, and the MC is a jackass, he had the possibility to persuade Ayase, but he chose not to , well in the end he will be the one who will live with that regret to the end of his life since he decided to finish some dumb game in place of having a chance of having Ayase at his side for a lifetime.Last modified on 2021-12-01 at 10:37
#13 by kidbuu25
2021-12-01 at 10:17
< report >No problem, mate. We all have our own opinion and standard so it's fine to discuss like this. Nice to talk about it with you. :)
#14 by dragonslay
2021-12-01 at 10:18
< report >#11 hahaha I feel you, my friend, I am the same I'm here just to complain and relieve some of my frustration, IMO the series could have easily ended in a happy way, but the author just had to force this unwanted bitter pill down our throats :)).Last modified on 2021-12-01 at 10:24
#15 by kidbuu25
2021-12-01 at 10:27
< report >Let's wish for a FD where they fix everything like Kin'iro cuz it's such a waste to end it like this including routes for sub heroines. :)
#16 by dragonslay
2021-12-01 at 10:30
< report >Yeah, let's hope they do that :))) , I was quite surprised that at least Shion didn't got her own route, besides Shion, I really want a Uishi Himeko, she does have enough of a backstory to qualify for her own route.
#17 by kidbuu25
2021-12-01 at 11:00
< report >For me it's Yuina and Erika (not because I want 3 some scene with their related partner respectively lol). Other than that, Himeko-chan sensei is nice too as you said but it will be even harder than Kiriha for our hetare MC because I remember she rejected her crush so she could keep chasing her dream when she was still student. :)
#18 by 4digitmen
2021-12-01 at 13:00
< report >The lack of spoiler tags in this thread is astounding.
#19 by dragonslay
2021-12-01 at 13:43
< report >Well mate sorry but, as you can see, most of the review is covered in a spoiler tag, it should have been obvious that there will be spoilers in the comments ...
#20 by funnerific
2021-12-01 at 14:42
< report >You didn't even bother with that at first. And you were the first to stop using spoiler tags in these comments. Just goes to show how little you care about others.
#21 by dragonslay
2021-12-01 at 14:57
< report >Once again, with all the respect buddy, what do you expect from a review that is mostly covered by a spoiler tag? it should be obvious that such a review has spoilers...

At this point ur putting the blame on me for no reason, if you don't want to be spoiled then don't look at a review covered by the spoiler tag ..... even more, the thread is only visible if you click on the review covered by the spoiler tag and scroll down a bit..... If you don't want to be spoiled then don't click on a review that has the spoiler tag, this should be more than obvious...Last modified on 2021-12-01 at 15:29
#22 by funnerific
2021-12-01 at 17:03
< report >Are you already forgetting post #2 lol
#23 by 4digitmen
2021-12-01 at 20:54
< report >#21

I like how when you're called out on your bullshit you decide to make up rules that don't exist on the spot.

You're blatantly being a hypocrite. Not only did you forget to spoiler tag your own review initially, *you* were the one who stopped using spoiler tags starting with message #7. I don't know how much mods enforce this, but getting someone to delete all this shit would be nice.
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