Review of Yuumei Sakai o Koto ni Suru
| Subject | Yuumei Sakai o Koto ni Suru |
| By | Helpfulness: 1 Vote: 5ayuanx on 2023-11-21 last updated on 2023-12-27 |
| Review | This game could have been a great story, but the writer's own kinky taste of perverted sex coupled with the bad writing ruined it. Especially the depiction of the protagonist--for one second he is the shy goody two shoes from head to toe, then the next second he becomes the embodiment of a serial rapist who has no feeling of guilt at all. And once the sex scene is done, he is instantly back to a saint in a snap. And don't get it wrong, he is not possessed by some ghost--according to the writer--he did all that with his own free will from the bottom of his heart. There is no gradual transition in mentality or emotion, nor any aftershock or repercussion, because the writer didn't bother to write any. This applies not only to the protagonist, but also to all the heroines, as if everyone only had a memory of 3 minutes that auto reset whenever the director shouted "cut!". To build a convincing story, you need logic; to shape a believable character, you need more logic--mentally and emotionally coherent logic, which the writer failed completely in this game. |
| 1 point |